Given our recent experience with collapsed sewer pipes and the need to involve a bank to get the repairs done, I'd say that we must be the "most American" about whom the authors writes. I'm glad our story is finally being told. It's a shame that it ends two syllables short of Haiku length.
Wednesday, December 7, 2011 at 10:05AM
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Think of it as a Tweet. Bet you find it pretty well-developed now, don't you? (Gotta work at that deconstruction, man.)
Also doesn't need that comma.
Insert colon joke here....
Points for indenting at start of new paragraph and capitalizing proper noun.
Given our recent experience with collapsed sewer pipes and the need to involve a bank to get the repairs done, I'd say that we must be the "most American" about whom the authors writes. I'm glad our story is finally being told. It's a shame that it ends two syllables short of Haiku length.